These are pretty interesting. I like what you've done to the second one on the top row. It's unique to see how you have incorporated the rings into the graphic icon.
The third one on the top row also has a nice touch to it but it would also be interesting to see how it would look without the letter l attached to Olympic rings.
I like the thumbnail with the olympic rings are going up from the o in Florence. Its simple and fun. The one right under it looks interesting too with thw 16 being in the Fl and incorporating it with the rings as well.
WELL DONE!!! I like most of them. :) My favorite one is the bottom left one. The one with Pisa on top of the rings. I like the idea of using one of the most famous architectural buildings that Florence is known for as your graphic element. One thing I would change about it is to the placement of the type. In my opinion if you place Florence on top of Pisa, it will be more effective.
First of, I think you need to be careful just using '16. At a quick glance, it seems like it'll be the 16th Olympics. It's hard using year abbreviations now that we are entering the 2000's teens. I'm not sure if you are allowed to tilt the olympic rings, but nice thinking.
I like the abstract tilted tower with all the information in the front center. All the other ones with the tower seem so generic. Everyone has done it. However, if you are allowed to tilt the rings, then I'd say go for the where the rings make up the tower. Its really cute with a flag on top.
Nice details, but I think try to think a little more abstract.
I like the first one, is interesting, it resembles some feeling of florence maybe the style... decorative... the type and digits are tided in... nice job faith keep it up!!!
I like the ones which are on first top row right and third top row right. as for first top row right I like how you design the rings as the tower. Nice idea! Other sketch looks great and could work because good balance. I also like how the rings and the building touch each other that looks good.
These are pretty interesting. I like what you've done to the second one on the top row. It's unique to see how you have incorporated the rings into the graphic icon.
ReplyDeleteThe third one on the top row also has a nice touch to it but it would also be interesting to see how it would look without the letter l attached to Olympic rings.
Overall, they look good. =)
I like the thumbnail with the olympic rings are going up from the o in Florence. Its simple and fun. The one right under it looks interesting too with thw 16 being in the Fl and incorporating it with the rings as well.
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WELL DONE!!! I like most of them. :) My favorite one is the bottom left one. The one with Pisa on top of the rings. I like the idea of using one of the most famous architectural buildings that Florence is known for as your graphic element. One thing I would change about it is to the placement of the type. In my opinion if you place Florence on top of Pisa, it will be more effective.
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ReplyDeleteFirst of, I think you need to be careful just using '16. At a quick glance, it seems like it'll be the 16th Olympics. It's hard using year abbreviations now that we are entering the 2000's teens. I'm not sure if you are allowed to tilt the olympic rings, but nice thinking.
I like the abstract tilted tower with all the information in the front center. All the other ones with the tower seem so generic. Everyone has done it. However, if you are allowed to tilt the rings, then I'd say go for the where the rings make up the tower. Its really cute with a flag on top.
Nice details, but I think try to think a little more abstract.
-Jahaira
I like the 3rd at the upper left. I think that sort of water wave design can be pretty effective.
ReplyDeleteI like the first one, is interesting, it resembles some feeling of florence maybe the style... decorative... the type and digits are tided in... nice job faith keep it up!!!
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ReplyDeleteI like the ones which are on first top row right and third top row right. as for first top row right I like how you design the rings as the tower. Nice idea! Other sketch looks great and could work because good balance. I also like how the rings and the building touch each other that looks good.
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