I like the bottom left most but you may want to be aware because it's very similar to the design of illustrator cs2. Plus those shapes are a little bit too sharp you might want to make them smoother.
The second one with the apple logo for the tittle of the i works the best for me. I think the others are too far from the apple brand and their past styles.
Your first thumbnail works the best, I think. You can have fun with the different icons for your other software. Using two colors can also be a great advantage because you have a set style and theme.
I agree with Paul about how these don't look like the Apple Brand. I like the close up of the purple flower one, and the one with the camera drawing (maybe another brush). I think that the black background makes it seems fresh or new.
The screened effects on the blue package are appealing. I think that you need to study the product line of Apple a little more. These sketches don't seem to fit in well with their current branding.
Well done!!! Your first one is amazing. I like the abstract shape of the camera with the brush strokes. I think it's very different than everything else I've seen so far. I also like the contrast between your colors. The addition of yellow has created a unique look to it. Is it for flash?
The second one from the first row works best. It sticks to the Apple Brand. Apple has a clean and smooth appearance. The second one has that similar look. The I and the apple image could be brought down a tad bit.
They are all great ideas but could be too much for Apple.
I really like (lol) the 3rd and 5th designs you've made. They both fit nicely into the overall style that Apple likes to use and both have great color too. Nice use of type and negative space - keep up the good work!
i like either number 3 or 4. The reason being that I like the contrast in the background vs the image that is like a flower or some kind of image. I think if you were to have like little silhouettes come out in a subtle way that could work, but I don't think that any of them say iphoto to me. It seems like it doesn't fit in with other apple products.
I am concerned that your designs do not look part of the apple franchise, but what worries me the most is I don't think apple needs packaging for these programs. Don't they already come on your computer or are easily downloadable over the internet for free? If I'm wrong, then disregard that lol.
About your designs. I like the idea of the second one (top middle). Its very simple and clean. I love the negative space. Would every program be identical to this design? It may come out a little boring if all three are exactly the same.
I like the bottom left most but you may want to be aware because it's very similar to the design of illustrator cs2. Plus those shapes are a little bit too sharp you might want to make them smoother.
ReplyDeleteThe second one with the apple logo for the tittle of the i works the best for me. I think the others are too far from the apple brand and their past styles.
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Your first thumbnail works the best, I think. You can have fun with the different icons for your other software. Using two colors can also be a great advantage because you have a set style and theme.
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I agree with Paul about how these don't look like the Apple Brand. I like the close up of the purple flower one, and the one with the camera drawing (maybe another brush). I think that the black background makes it seems fresh or new.
ReplyDeleteThe screened effects on the blue package are appealing. I think that you need to study the product line of Apple a little more. These sketches don't seem to fit in well with their current branding.
ReplyDeleteWell done!!! Your first one is amazing. I like the abstract shape of the camera with the brush strokes. I think it's very different than everything else I've seen so far. I also like the contrast between your colors. The addition of yellow has created a unique look to it. Is it for flash?
ReplyDeleteThe second one from the first row works best. It sticks to the Apple Brand. Apple has a clean and smooth appearance. The second one has that similar look. The I and the apple image could be brought down a tad bit.
ReplyDeleteThey are all great ideas but could be too much for Apple.
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I really like (lol) the 3rd and 5th designs you've made. They both fit nicely into the overall style that Apple likes to use and both have great color too. Nice use of type and negative space - keep up the good work!
ReplyDeletei like either number 3 or 4. The reason being that I like the contrast in the background vs the image that is like a flower or some kind of image. I think if you were to have like little silhouettes come out in a subtle way that could work, but I don't think that any of them say iphoto to me. It seems like it doesn't fit in with other apple products.
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I am concerned that your designs do not look part of the apple franchise, but what worries me the most is I don't think apple needs packaging for these programs. Don't they already come on your computer or are easily downloadable over the internet for free? If I'm wrong, then disregard that lol.
ReplyDeleteAbout your designs. I like the idea of the second one (top middle). Its very simple and clean. I love the negative space. Would every program be identical to this design? It may come out a little boring if all three are exactly the same.
Keep at it. Good job.