it is visually bold. but i think the super clean icons dont match the photos. maybe it just because you have 3 different styles going on-- clean apple like style, textured photo, and a vector based paint splat. maybe there needs to be some of the style used in the icon in the photo itself, merging the two.
The large flowers are working well, I think the reflected logos look really strange, it makes them look separated from the rest of the design. I also wouldn't put splatter over the flowers, maybe just in the background, they take away from the flowers.
your image quality must be in focus if you are going to zoom in on the photograph this close. The croppings and the compositions are improving. The ID package lacks a range in value that the other two do not have. In needs areas of light and dark contrast/lighting.
Your ad tagline... personifying the flower - is not working. think of something more clever. YOu are on the right track, but its needs more work. The white one works better with your package campaign.
it is visually bold. but i think the super clean icons dont match the photos. maybe it just because you have 3 different styles going on-- clean apple like style, textured photo, and a vector based paint splat. maybe there needs to be some of the style used in the icon in the photo itself, merging the two.
ReplyDeleteThe large flowers are working well, I think the reflected logos look really strange, it makes them look separated from the rest of the design. I also wouldn't put splatter over the flowers, maybe just in the background, they take away from the flowers.
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your image quality must be in focus if you are going to zoom in on the photograph this close. The croppings and the compositions are improving.
ReplyDeleteThe ID package lacks a range in value that the other two do not have. In needs areas of light and dark contrast/lighting.
Your ad tagline... personifying the flower - is not working. think of something more clever. YOu are on the right track, but its needs more work. The white one works better with your package campaign.
Where is the pen tool one? I like that a lot. The big flowers look heavy visually. I think the left one has the greatest looking.
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